A few of my classmates (Maggie and Vivi) and I have exchanged our works for each other in order to give constructive criticism to further refining and enhancing our work.
Through their constructive criticism and feedback, I have realised that there are a few aspects that are in need for improvements. For instance, it is necessary for me to expand on my colour palette and do more sketches. I should try incorporating more colours in my designs instead of only using black or dark brown. I could include colours like pink and beige as mentioned from my mimicry mind map. Moreover, I should do more practical work, for instance drawing, in my sketchbook.
On the contrary, they found the strengths within my work to be my logo sketches (many beautiful illustrations of rabbits, deers, squirrels), typography (with flowy, undulating lines) as well as my mood boards (there are loads of colourful pictures). Additionally, she seems to find it interesting that I have included texture samples of lace and swatches of the colour scheme in my mimicry mind map.
Two of the above designs are what my classmates found to be the most fascinating. One thought it is interesting to see the combination of elements such as nature (e.g. vines) and animals (e.g. rabbits) together in calligraphy.
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